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Rasing the dogs
Nowadays, the number of people raising pets increasingly because many people want to find a buddy who can keep them company when they are lone or bored. Besides, the number of people who raise dogs or doggies more than the number of people who raise the other pets such as cats, mouse or rabbit. Therefore, some survey prove that people usually think over rasing dogs preferentially. Why? Some statement say that raising dogs provides many advantages including learning specific knowledge, acquiring positive personalities, and obtaining amusement.
Rasing dogs can often learn specific knowledge in many different part of rasing dogs. First, we can learn some special skill which can be used to take care dogs. For example, we can know how to feed them. Besides, we could know what food which they agree with, so we can learn many special skill to rasing dogs. Second, we have to learn how to manege the time of us. For instance, we have to find some time to feed them or walk them. Furthermore, they have to be took a bath by master, so we have to learn maneging our time to do something for them.